Thursday, 9 February 2012

Treatment

Treatment
1st the beginning- in the start of our film Red tornado we established the two hero’s and why he is a villain for. In the opening the hero’s Conor and Alex are just regular people. They see the villain Steve on the news and are disgusted. The next day Alex was walking to Conors ‘The hawks nest’ as he is walking there he is beaten up by Steve then villain. He then walks to conor all bruised a bleeding walks into Conor’s room outraged and wanting revenge.
2nd Middle – The Two hero’s plot there revenge with their new costumes which look like wannabe heroes. As they are plotting their revenge they are troubled about how to get Steve back but one day Conor was watching jimmy neutron followed by fairly odd parents and he suddenly comes up with a cunning plan to get Steve back to what he has done to Alex/ He runs to Alex’s to tell him the great news.
3rd End –The two heroes now have their plan set out and their all geared up in costume to get Steve back. They set off and prank call Steve pretending to be Stanley his useless sidekick for another new feed to the area but they trap him in a parking lot on the top of Sainsbury’s. They start to chase Steve but soon catch up and are forced to fight, slaps are thrown left right and centre between the three of them until the mighty battle has ended because of Steve running of crying to his mum. In the end the infamous duo of red tornado prevails.



I think that our treatment is good because it is a simple explination of what happens throughtout our film in enough detail so if a person read it they would understand what the film is about and who and what the characters are about.

Script

Stanley: 3..2..1..action...i said action..steve!

Steve: oh sorry anyways im going to destroy your towns and everything you know no one can do anything about it and no one can stop me!!!

Stanley: What about your mum?

Steve: shut up stanley!! Anyway yeah im gonna destroy your towns and everything you know no one can do anything about it and no one can stop me!!! Not even my mum...actually yeah my mum could. My name yes...my name is hmmmmm the critical eye.



CONOR: OMG I JUST GOT COLLATED!!!!
ALEX: CONOR JUST GO GET A LIFE MATE!!
CONOR: IF YOU DON’T LIKE IT GET OUT OF THE HAWKS NEST kaka kaka
ALEX: look conor I have been beaten up on my way to your ‘nest’
Conor: are you alright mate? We need to do something about this?

This is our script for the opening two minutes it is a little short but i think it is good because it gets the message across to the audience that the heros are seeking revenge for what steve (sam) has done.

Wednesday, 1 February 2012

Story board

Our story board is very simple but i believe effective because it gets the message across of what it is about which is a comedy about two ordinary people that like many other after a bad experience with a bad guy want to seek revenge and serve justice.
This is going to be in our title sequence this shows that there will be some action because of the picture the name shows that it is an action hero/villain but it also looks like a comic book strip going back to marvel but the bad thing with this is that you cannot tell that it could be a comedy although it will come across in the opening 2minutes that it is serious but then will take a change to comedy, hopefully this will take the audience by surprise that it looks serious but it actually a comedy.